
Nowadays, people use a lot of smart phones and
computers, especially in Korea because they are easy to carry, and very useful
when needed. A phone can be bad for your eyes because it has a small screen,
and a very bright light. A laptop isn’t as bad as a phone for your eyes, but it’s
sometimes too heavy to carry. The best solution for this problem that I could
think of is an Ipad.
Ipad has retina display, which comforts your eyes, not
like other phones. Is also has a big display, which you don’t have to concentrate
on a small point. These mention-able points are the strong points of Ipad in
display.
It can do all the things which a computer can do,
except some computer games which can only be played on computers, but others
like Microsoft Word or PowerPoint. This portable device is very comfortable
when you have to make a ppt, or checking them whether they have problems or
not.
I can also promise that I won’t play any games on it,
because I find them not as fascinating as computer or Xbox games, if you find
me playing any sort of games at any time, you can confiscate my Ipad, until
such time you feel comfortable.
As in conclusion, I need an Ipad to do my school
projects, and it is the easiest to do it with it. I strongly suggest you to buy
me one, so I can improve my grades, and some other future references

Are you sure that you'll not play games..?
ReplyDeleteWell, it's persuasive!
To be honest, I can see a very simple solution to your argument, which is to not buy you an ipad and make you use a home computer to do your work.
ReplyDeletebut as i have mentioned, i need it for school work! i have to check if i need any corrections to make in my work.
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