Friday, August 9, 2013

Persuasive essay (ipad)


Nowadays, people use a lot of smart phones and computers, especially in Korea because they are easy to carry, and very useful when needed. A phone can be bad for your eyes because it has a small screen, and a very bright light. A laptop isn’t as bad as a phone for your eyes, but it’s sometimes too heavy to carry. The best solution for this problem that I could think of is an Ipad.
Ipad has retina display, which comforts your eyes, not like other phones. Is also has a big display, which you don’t have to concentrate on a small point. These mention-able points are the strong points of Ipad in display.
It can do all the things which a computer can do, except some computer games which can only be played on computers, but others like Microsoft Word or PowerPoint. This portable device is very comfortable when you have to make a ppt, or checking them whether they have problems or not.
I can also promise that I won’t play any games on it, because I find them not as fascinating as computer or Xbox games, if you find me playing any sort of games at any time, you can confiscate my Ipad, until such time you feel comfortable.

As in conclusion, I need an Ipad to do my school projects, and it is the easiest to do it with it. I strongly suggest you to buy me one, so I can improve my grades, and some other future references

3 comments:

  1. Are you sure that you'll not play games..?
    Well, it's persuasive!

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  2. To be honest, I can see a very simple solution to your argument, which is to not buy you an ipad and make you use a home computer to do your work.

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  3. but as i have mentioned, i need it for school work! i have to check if i need any corrections to make in my work.

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